Is there a right and wrong way to start a professional email? Yes, and yes.
If you know the person you’re emailing, use their name in the salutation:
If you don’t know who exactly is going to read your email, you can use one of these options:
The first line should establish a connection and/or make the purpose of your email clear. If you have a mutual connection with the recipient, mention them. If you want to schedule a meeting, say so.
Hi Ms. Smith,
I was referred to you by your coworker, Abigail Adams, whom I met at the annual conference. She suggested I get in touch with you to discuss open positions on your team. I’ve attached my CV and cover letter.
Would you be able to discuss sometime next week?
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Mary Crawley
Hello Dr. Smith,
I’m writing about the open position on your research team. I saw your post on LinkedIn, but I have a few questions before I submit my materials.
Question 1
Question 2
Question 3
Thank you very much for your time.
Mary Crawley
Hi Jane,
I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to check in on the status of the latest test. Do you know when you’ll have the results? We’re eager to move forward with step two.
Best,
Mary
Or you can start off with a question:
Hi Jane,
Would you be able to meet me for coffee this week? I’d like to get an update on your latest work. I have some time Tuesday morning. Would that work for you?
Cheers,
Mary